T1+Persuade

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__Wednesday 6th April __ LI-to persuade someone to go and help christchurch. == ====SC: ====   ﻿   Living conditions in Christchurch  Living conditions are a very troubling in Christchurch after the earthquake hit. Many people have lost their homes and family members and they need new homes because their old homes got destroyed, well most of them did. There are at least 1000 homes that got damaged and 100 that need to be repaired and there are probably even more than that.They need your help to repair them and fast, because until you come and help they will be staying in an unsafe area. People need food and water, so you have to help out and donate canned food or bottled water, don’t give them food that needs to be cooked or put in the oven because they don’t have any kitchen resources. Do you want Christchurch not to have any food,water or even shelter? No, so get out there and donate food, water or even money and help the people in Christchurch.
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 Do you want the people in Christchurch to be staying in unsafe homes? That is a big NO, so you have to free up some safe places that people can stay, and feel safe.They should not feel anxious about anything happening to them and where they are staying, if they need even more places to stay they could even go a little bit out of town. With the money we have riased they can use it for a flight where their family is. We should make home's that are safe enough that if another earthquake hits they won’t fall down and get damaged.

 People! you have to come and help do the clean up because, do you want people in Christchurch to have to stay in a risky area? No, so come and help and do some cleaning up, I am not just saying 8 or 9 people, I’m saying everyone, so get up and help Christchurch citizens.Keep on helping the people so they can get back to their ordinary lives again and not have to worry about their house getting destroyed again.

By Erica Laura Room 29

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30/3/11 - Next week I will edit this with you Erica Week 6&7 Living conditions in Christchurch

 Living conditions are a very troubling in Christchurch after the earthquake hit. Many people have lost there homes and family members and they need new homes because their old homes got destroyed well most of them did. There are atleast 1000 homes that got damaged and 100 that need to be repaired there are probably even more than that.They need your help to repair them and fast because until you come and help they will be staying in an unsafe area. People need food and water, so you have to help out and donate canned food or bottled water, don’t give them food that needs to be cooked or put in the oven because they don’t have any kitchen resources. Do you want Christchurch not to have any food,water or even shelter? NO, so get out there and donate food, water or even money and help the people in Christchurch.

 Do you want the people in Christchurch to be staying in unsafe homes? That is a big NO, so you have to free up some safe places that people can stay, and feel safe.They should not feel anxious about anything happening to them and where they are staying, if they need even more place to stay they could even go a little bit out of town. With the money we riased you can use it for a flight where there family is. We should make home's that are safe enough that if another earthquake hits they won’t fall down and get damaged.

<span style="font: normal normal normal 18px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin: 0px;"> People! you have to come and help do the clean up because, do you want people in Christchurch to have to stay in a risky area? No, so come and help and do some cleaning up, I am not just saying 8 or 9 people, I’m saying everyone, so get up and help Christchurch citizens.So just keep on helping the people so they can get back to there ordinary lives again and not have to worry about there house getting destroyed again.

<span style="font: normal normal normal 18px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin: 0px;">By Erica Laura <span style="font: normal normal normal 18px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin: 0px;">Room 29