Rimu+Story

__Friday 17th June__ “Sorry I’m late Mr. Wing, we had to take a detour through the park because of the road works and then the strangest thing hap- “Sorry I’m late Mr. Wing, we had to take a detour through the park because of the road works and then the strangest thing happened

I fixed happened because it was spelt wrong.

I’m the basketball star, the lead role in the production, awesome all r ound kid?”  I’m the basketball star, the lead role in the production, awesome all round kid?” I fixed round because it had a space between it.

She tried to slide the key into the door, but it wouldn’t budge. “The key won’t work!” She shreked.

She tried to slide the key into the door, but it wouldn’t budge. “The key won’t work!” She shrieked.

I fixed shrieked because it was spelt wrong